In order to receive a good mark and have a back up in case we wanted a change, we decided to make two openings with different ideas and different story lines. We had many changes to make for our final video however, according to the audience feedback our Second opening (our current one) was better than our original one. We were told the camera work, editing and storyline was much better than our original movie even though the pair had their good parts. Our first movie was about a girl who was haunted by her past life and this caused the death of two teenagers, although we used the enigma code in this movie also, our audience feedback said that the original had bad camera work and an unclear confusing storyline that wasn't understood within the opening whereas our current video was said to have effective camera work as well as a storyline that started off confusing yet became clear throughout the opening and ended with a cliffhanger which everyone thought was very effective. We decided to keep our title credits and our production company logo as we thought that these were also very effective and were edited at a good standard. We also completed pre-production for both of our movies but when we decided to stick with our new opening we kept the pre-production of this opening.
What some of the audience said (Within the target audience) ;
"I like the new opening better than the old one" - Rachel Michele
"The old film was good but the new one has a more appealing concept to me"- Stacey Fennessy
"I think that you'll get better marks from the new opening, I really want to watch the film now!" - Jamie McDougall
We hope that watching both will be enjoyable.
This is our original
This is the new opening
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